Friday, September 29, 2006

From heaven to Hell.....

You show me heaven,
but soon you show me hell.
Even a few days back
I thought all was well.

You vent out all your anger
on me this is so unfair.
I told you it aint my fault,
but you would'nt even care.

I think i dont deserve
to be treated this way.
My love for you is true,
its not a toy to play.

My wave of trust,
which you frequenty betray.
my mind is very confused
do i leave or do i stay.

The initial intimacy
and the passion is all lost.
Why do the selected few
resurface from your past.

All i seek is truthfulness
and all i seek is love.
You always end up hurting me
I cant decipher how.

I thought we'd lead our
lives forever together.
You say you dont think
that we are made for each other.

Everytime i tell myself,
'You will find the right way'.
but now i've got to decide,
Do i leave or Do i stay......


p.s: This poem was written by me this afternoon in college. It is a very harsh persiod in life for me right now. But still, on a lighter note, try singing this in the tune of "The Wicker Man" by iron maiden. It fits jus right... pure coincidence...

9 Comments:

Blogger Eternal Child said...

owah.. those are some true feelings.. and i'll probably never know how much it hurts.. but hey..

life's jus a song
you gotta sing along
and when the day has passed you by
you'll laugh over it till it makes you cry..

heh heh... not bad eh.. :D i guess it'll fit into wicker man tune too.. never heard that one by maiden.. will do so now though.. :D

oh n i have read that love lost article.. and again..

life's a song.. bla bla bla.. heh heh.. :D

chill dude.. life's too short to be spent worrying over mirages.. look at the sunny side n be happy.. :D

cheers..!!

8:16 AM  
Blogger Eternal Child said...

too much adivce for one post eh..?? heh heh.. kindly excuse.. :D

8:17 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

very good poetry..i really do hope u get out of this phase soon..!!

9:57 PM  
Blogger Sundararaman said...

hey man.. cheer up..! all is fair in love ..!! (idu romba sagajam).
this phase is an essential feature of every successful relationship.!!
( i have seen even severe break-ups
which at the end people forget and forgive and live happily ever after..!!) time to stick up broken hearts ..!!!
nice poetry.
NOTE :-this phase is an essential feature of every successful relationship.!!

1:25 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

simply superb!!!!!

8:01 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

kd...its all a phase u gotta face! so cheer up///!

8:03 AM  
Blogger Intrepid traveller's dairy said...

Hey Kedhar...Everything happens for a good reason...sometimes its good to just let things take its course...don't let something bug you to death....it sometimes leads to depression or stress which can prevent you from concentrating your own work....

11:06 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey dude,

how many times do you wanna get yourself hurt??how many times are you gonna cry for some betrayals in return??how many times are you gonna plead for some harsh statements back??

Its time..Why is she special?? because shes caring??because she is lovable??because shez gorgeous?? Take a break man. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beohlder.Everybody has just these reasons to quote.Is there something more in her which deserves all these pains?? nope nope nope!

Bail Out! Enjoy Life!

Gud luck.

11:35 PM  
Blogger Jav! said...

man!! i wud love to write somethin lik tat!! and hey.. dont worry.. bad times pass real fuckin fast tho th days ur in it seem damn slow..

7:00 AM  

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